"When it becomes dawn
The gigantic sea begins to yawn
Waves rolling roughly on the sand
He begin to stretch out and reach the land"
The poem is based on James Reeves
In my classroom, we have been learning Similes and Metaphors and
one of our tasks was to write our Stanza with a buddy on "The sea is a hungry dog".
The author of the poem compared two unlike things, a hungry dog and the sea.
Tino pai Toakase.I love your poem and like the way you gave credit to James Reeves for his work. Have you checked out the Ako Hiko Podcast
ReplyDeletewhere some students are reading their poems? Maybe you could read your poem and record your voice?